Holidays are something I like and I enjoy Christmas the most. This holiday is a holiday that lights up everyone’s happiness. Santa Claus is the one who grants all our wishes to make everyone be happy. When Christmas comes, one thing that makes everyone wonder is, what do I want for Christmas?I am saying this because scratching my head off for thinking of what I want to buy. Then I found out. I want an I Phone 4G.
Right now my dad already has the I Phone 2G and is using it as a cellphone. My dad uses it the way everyone uses a cellphone and to browse things on the Internet. I want to use it to have fun by playing games, listening to songs, watching movies, and watch some stuff on YouTube. The I Phone 4G is more advanced which will make me get to things faster than the 2G version of it. I also want this because, most of the things I can do on the computer I can do on the I Phone which saves time for me setting the computer up when all I need to do is turn on the phone and go to the Internet icon.As you might actually know, I am a kid who tries my best to work hard in school to get good grades. I spend lots of time paying attention to what my parents say and my teachers in school say. Though, I think it takes a lot of time for me to do my homework and sometimes I need to use the computer for my homework, I think if I get the I Phone 4G I don’t really need to use up most of my time just to get on the Internet in the computer when the I Phone already has like a mini computer in it. This will help me do things quicker and have more fun on it.
I know you will have a hard time getting presents for people all over the world. It will be a really good thing if you grant me my holiday wish I asked about and make me happy. It is o.k. whether or not you granted my, but I am really thankful for all the presents you gave me throughout my life as I lived.
THANK YOU
From,
Sai Srinivasan
From,
Sai Srinivasan
I liked the way you started the blog and how you asked a question. I also liked the length of this piece. Ithink you should make more of the piece in present tense. Overall I liked your reasons why you should get the I phone4g
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