There are a plenty of advertisements and each one has their own speciality. I chose an advertisement about an m&m's commercial. It showed how it would be if you actually ate that thing. I will convince a Tv Station to buy or use this/my advertisement to put on with their commercials. This commercial iis a good commercial because it shows a funny way to show that the this happens when you buy. But a really cool thing is that they showed the claims and the pewrsuasive techniques in just pictures in a funny way. This advertisement will be best to entertain kids and all the other people that like to have chocolate or other flavors and people that like ice cream.
Very well written, Sai! You really put a lot thoughts into this. You showed a lot of reasons why you should put this on TV as a commercial. For example, " This commercial is a good commercial because it shows a funny way to show that the this happens when you buy. But a really cool thing is that they showed the claims and the pewrsuasive techniques in just pictures in a funny way. " But you could put a little more effort. For instance, you could of wrote what kinds of persuasive techniquiches or what was funny abbout this in a way. You just had a few grammer mistakes. Overall, very good effort but just put a little more into it!
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