Christmas has been a famous holiday that people celebrate. Jake and Emily look forword to Christmas. But with all the money loss that they got they can't afford a party. In their family, Christmas is a holiday they tried not to miss.
"Christamas is coming next week and it's been a new year since we haven't celebrated it. Mom loves Christmas, but with the less money we have, we can't celebrate it." Emily said with a frowning face.
As Jake is watching tv, he gets the idea of something. "How about we make Christmas?"
"What do you mean Jake?" Asks Emily confused.
"I mean we can get materials and make a surprise party for mom and dad. Lets give them a happy day. They work day and night for us, so lets do this for them."
"Then where do we get the materials?" Asks Emily still confused.
"How about.... lets go to Uncle Sal. Lets tell him the secret and maybe he can part of it. Maybe he can get us the materials too." Says Jake.
As they were walking, they see Uncle Sal walking near the department store.
"Uncle Sal!" Yell Jake ans Emily.
"Hey guys! What are you guys doing here?" Asks Sal i his grumpy voice.
"I have a secret to tell you."
"Christamas is coming next week and it's been a new year since we haven't celebrated it. Mom loves Christmas, but with the less money we have, we can't celebrate it." Emily said with a frowning face.
As Jake is watching tv, he gets the idea of something. "How about we make Christmas?"
"What do you mean Jake?" Asks Emily confused.
"I mean we can get materials and make a surprise party for mom and dad. Lets give them a happy day. They work day and night for us, so lets do this for them."
"Then where do we get the materials?" Asks Emily still confused.
"How about.... lets go to Uncle Sal. Lets tell him the secret and maybe he can part of it. Maybe he can get us the materials too." Says Jake.
As they were walking, they see Uncle Sal walking near the department store.
"Uncle Sal!" Yell Jake ans Emily.
"Hey guys! What are you guys doing here?" Asks Sal i his grumpy voice.
"I have a secret to tell you."
Sai, your essay is incomplete. It never had a solution to the problem. What happened? I know that you could do much better because I know that you are very smart.(Find that hard to believe? Yes... I said that.... LOL) I likd your topic for the story because it was different. Most people did that it was someone's birthday(like me!)Overall, you did a great job, but next time you should complete you story!
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