Thursday, March 31, 2011

School Uniforms

  “Personal liberty is the paramount essential to human dignity and human happiness.” (Bulwer) Liberty is essential for a human’s inference on uniforms.  If the government makes a law that all students need to wear uniforms, some people might like it, some people might not.  Two main reasons to not have that rule is because the students won’t have the freedom to wear what you want and for any religious reasons they won’t be able to wear anything other than uniforms. Having uniforms is not a good thing for most students, and shouldn’t be a law in any state.  When you are having law in your school that everyone needs to wear a uniform, some bad things in that choice are: the students will think it is weird to be the same, the student needed to wear anything special for any religious reason, they won’t be able to because all they would be able to wear are uniforms; and the students won’t have the freedom to wear what they want.
  “Only our individual faith in freedom can keep us free.”  (Dwight D. Eisenhower).  The students need freedom to wear what they want.  When students don’t wear what they want to wear, they won’t focus on school.  They will focus on how they look.  Also when they don’t get to wear what they want to school, they will feel better.  But, the opposition might say that it will be like that only for a little.  They’re wrong because even it will be for a little, they will still be really mad about it. Kids should actually have the freedom to wear whatever they want.
  “When we lose the right to be different, we lose the privilege to be free.” (Charks Evans Hughes, US Supreme Court Justice, 1925)  They will think it is weird to be the same. They will feel like they are all the same.  When they are all the same, everyone gets mixed up with one another.  The opposition might say like the feeling of being the same and getting mixed up will not be for long.  But they will still get mixed up, by everyone looking the same each day.  None of the kids like to be the same.
  “The unity of freedom has never relied on uniformity of opinion.” (John F. Kennedy).  When people have to wear something religious, you can’t because you have to wear uniforms.  When people like me, have to wear something special for religious reasons, they won’t be able to because it is important.  Also, the parents would get mad that their kid can’t wear anything religious, because of the uniforms.  They might think that not everyone is going to get mad, so it is ok.  But it isn’t ok because no one should disobey religious things.  In their religion, they will not want to let the religious thing get stopped by uniforms.
  Having uniforms is not a good decision to have for three main reasons.  The students will think it is dumb when you wear uniforms that make you look the same; you want to wear something religious for a holiday, but you can’t and we won’t have the freedom to wear what we want.  Each student wants to have freedom so don’t ruin it with uniforms!

Thursday, March 24, 2011

Boardroom Essay

  The Frenzy Energy Gum is nothing like the rest. It is the, “Mixture of Energy and Flavors in one bite.” The Frenzy Energy Gum according to a number of different types of gum. The Frenzy Energy Gum is a gum that can give you a numerous amount of energy for athletes, sports people, and other people that need a lot of energy to do what they need to do. This gum has an everlasting taste for everyone to eat and chew. People can enjoy it all the time. This energy gum can also give you strength for you to be really healthy and strong. About 80% of the people like gum. This product will be very really successful since everyone might like the abilities in this piece of gum.
  The Frenzy Energy Gum is mainly popular for it’s flavors. The Frenzy Energy Gum has 9 different varieties of flavors to choose from. It’s flavors have an enjoyable sensation eating the gum. This gum also has flavors that most other gum don’t have, to give it a blast of taste! The flavors in this um will blast everyone off!
  The Frenzy Energy Gum has an enormous number of energy in one piece of gum. The gum has a lot energy to make everyone have a lot of energy for a long lasting time. This gum is used for a lot of people. It is for sports people, athletics, or anybody. This gum is also used to help older people to stay strong and be healthy. Blast of with unlimited power of energy in just one bite of this gum.
  Just because the Frenzy Energy Gum gives energy, that doesn’t mean it doesn’t give strength!  The strength in this gum gives us an ability to be strong.  This gum is for everyone.  This gum has nothing really poisonous or anything for strength.  If you want strength, get the Frenzy Energy Gum.
  But, The Frenzy Energy Gum is not an easy thing to find.  It sells out really quickly for its fantastic features.  This Energy Gum freshens anyone smelly mouth.  It sells out quickly for it’s fantastic flavors.  It gives you strength to do a lot of things.  For all these reasons, a lot of people need/want them, such as sports men, athletes, workers, adults or anyone who’s ready for a blast!
 The Frenzy Energy Gum has a lot of important things.  It can give you a blast of flavors, energy and strength.  This gum has 9 different flavors.  So when you get the gum, you will feel that this gum is a gum that you have never tasted before.  Get yours as quickly as possible, and have your fruity blast!

Thursday, March 17, 2011

My Commercial/Advertisement

My group's advertisement was recorded on Tuesday. I really thought my advertisement was good because, we had all the things that were included. Most things like the three claims, three persuasive techniques, a slogan, a headline, a statistic, and a counter argument +. This advertisement was also creative for the way my group had set the product of the commercial. We did it in a very unique and different way. I think that we had to work on some things about still memorizing the script so we won't feel nervous and won't think about what it was when our part comes for us to talk. But overall I thought we did a good job for such beginners. And we tried our best!!!

Thursday, March 10, 2011

Convincing a TV Station

There are a plenty of advertisements and each one has their own speciality. I chose an advertisement about an m&m's commercial. It showed how it would be if you actually ate that thing. I will convince a Tv Station to buy or use this/my advertisement to put on with their commercials. This commercial iis a good commercial because it shows a funny way to show that the this happens when you buy. But a really cool thing is that they showed the claims and the pewrsuasive techniques in just pictures in a funny way. This advertisement will be best to entertain kids and all the other people that like to have chocolate or other flavors and people that like ice cream.

Thursday, February 24, 2011

Ad Campaign

 I saw a Coke a Cola advertisement showing a dog so tired sitting down in the park. But once it finds a Coke a Cola bottle, it drinks it and gets so much energy that it dances for the song "Black-Eyed Peas," becaus ethat was the song they put for the super-bowl night with the Steelers vs. Packers. I thought this advertisement was really funny because when you find a really tired dog in the park, you give it water to drink. But when it drank the Coke a Cola, it started danceing forever. So I found this advertisement one of the funniest advertisements there. It was really awesome!

Thursday, February 17, 2011

My Career Job Experience

With all the months of the career unit thing, I have learned alot. From everything we have done in this class about the career unit thing, I will use the things that I learned now for when I will really go for getting a job when I am older. This helped me have an experience of how hard it is, how many steps there are to do this, and now I will not struggle about the things I need to do in my future career life. This was also a fun opportunity that we can learn and discuss to our friends about the career unit. In this career unit, what I disliked was the searching that we mostly needed to do on google if we didn't have the information that we are supposed have on the website that we were looking on. But there were a lot of things that I liked about the career unit thing. I really liked the way that we were acting like we were older people and that we were going to a real interview with a real COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY, LETTER of RECOMMENDATION, and real RESUME. I really enjoyed all the things that we did and this was on of the most fun things I have done in the whole 6th Grade time of the Year!!!